The contents page is taking shape as I can see the usage of key features of a contents page but, it looks incomplete and lacks detail as the tags for the contents lacks enough information to make a person want to look at it for practical reasons of navigating the magazine as it is too brief. In addition there's too many of the same cover stars across multiple images. Finally the genre of the magazine is not being shown clearly as it looks more like a fashion magazine than a music magazine.
I can see it's unfinished but what you've done so far looks great, awesome photography, here are my points to improve: - It all looks quite plain, I can't really tell what the genre is so maybe edit the background of your photos to something funky like a club or something relevant? - Maybe put your 'Contents Page' on the left side so that you have room for a different eye grabbing title on the right hand side - I'm assuming your genre is like general mainstream chart music? If so your contents page needs colour
The contents page is taking shape as I can see the usage of key features of a contents page but, it looks incomplete and lacks detail as the tags for the contents lacks enough information to make a person want to look at it for practical reasons of navigating the magazine as it is too brief. In addition there's too many of the same cover stars across multiple images. Finally the genre of the magazine is not being shown clearly as it looks more like a fashion magazine than a music magazine.
ReplyDeleteI can see it's unfinished but what you've done so far looks great, awesome photography, here are my points to improve:
ReplyDelete- It all looks quite plain, I can't really tell what the genre is so maybe edit the background of your photos to something funky like a club or something relevant?
- Maybe put your 'Contents Page' on the left side so that you have room for a different eye grabbing title on the right hand side
- I'm assuming your genre is like general mainstream chart music? If so your contents page needs colour