i think the front page looks v good however it looks rather plain and simple, it doenst really give the reader a insight or idea to what will be inside :0
I really like your front cover, the colour scheme is great and unique, something you can improve on would be if you added more text on the front cover. The dps is not completed but the image you have used it looks very professional and you have a clear colour scheme running throughout the magazine.
the cover is very clear and i like the image you used it's very inticive however your magazine is very simple so I think you need to add more cover lines
Awesome photography your model looks beautiful but: - The tip of your f on the masthead has been cut off - Her top looks fake in the sense that you went over it with a black brush on Photoshop? Maybe lighten the opacity of that layer? Maybe it's just my eyes but it's on her right side especially her hair is on top of her shoulder but not on top of her top
My other comment was for the front cover, this is my comment for the DPS: - Awesome photography - Don't forget to add in your page numbers - Needs more colour and things to make it more eye-catching
i think the front page looks v good however it looks rather plain and simple, it doenst really give the reader a insight or idea to what will be inside :0
ReplyDeleteThe cover image looks well edited and I can clearly see the colour scheme of black, red and white but, the cover looks plain and lacks information
ReplyDeleteI really like your front cover, the colour scheme is great and unique, something you can improve on would be if you added more text on the front cover. The dps is not completed but the image you have used it looks very professional and you have a clear colour scheme running throughout the magazine.
ReplyDeletethe cover is very clear and i like the image you used it's very inticive however your magazine is very simple so I think you need to add more cover lines
ReplyDeleteAwesome photography your model looks beautiful but:
ReplyDelete- The tip of your f on the masthead has been cut off
- Her top looks fake in the sense that you went over it with a black brush on Photoshop? Maybe lighten the opacity of that layer? Maybe it's just my eyes but it's on her right side especially her hair is on top of her shoulder but not on top of her top
My other comment was for the front cover, this is my comment for the DPS:
ReplyDelete- Awesome photography
- Don't forget to add in your page numbers
- Needs more colour and things to make it more eye-catching