Seema, you have drawn on some useful and up to date research for this article and have constructed a mainly coherent argument. Just clarify that NME is a magazine for fans of rock music, *not* for one specific band. This is not clear. You have used InDesign appropriately to follow conventions of page layout, with columns and pictures. I'm not sure about why you did a double-width column towards the end of the piece? Vanessa
Seema, you have drawn on some useful and up to date research for this article and have constructed a mainly coherent argument. Just clarify that NME is a magazine for fans of rock music, *not* for one specific band. This is not clear. You have used InDesign appropriately to follow conventions of page layout, with columns and pictures. I'm not sure about why you did a double-width column towards the end of the piece? Vanessa
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